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Post by unlacemycorset on Sept 25, 2012 22:57:31 GMT -6
Roses are red Violets are blue This format's old Let's start something new!
Tee-hee~ My pot shot at the admin. He'll get a kick out of it. Anyways, this is my own personal poetry thread! I'll add all my crap into this post until it gets full, then I'll start a new one. For now, here's two:
Tides ------- Beneath the waves and inky seas The worlds all seize like twitching trees. We cannot plumb those murky deeps And it creeps Into our skin that our sin Is all that lies within, But amidst the swirls and ebbing tides Our lives can float onto the shore And nevermore must we abhor That which is unknown.
Crescent ----------- Dwelling here by night. Monster in plain sight. Who do I cry for now? Singing softly 'neath the crescent moon. Through the forest old... Traveler, young and bold. What are you here for? You must leave me 'neath the crescent moon. Though his smile was bright Eyes filled with starlight. My hands could not warm him... He died softly 'neath the crescent moon... Dwelling here by night. Guarding his grave site. I wait for him forever... Singing softly 'neath the crescent moon.
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Post by Nick_Witted on Sept 30, 2012 8:43:44 GMT -6
I'm not much of a poet myself, so I don't know what criticism I can give, but I would like to see more, soon. This is nice.
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